
see
sea
vision
whole jewel
wave after wave hides
you in a swirl of sand below
reach of ready hands
souvenir
obscure
chance
pure
{A Real Toads prompt based on the photo above. The form is the Fibonacci. The number of syllables for each line is based on the first six numbers in the Fibonacci sequence (starting with one) 1,1,2,3,5,8. Here, I reversed it as well.}
Gorgeous wordplay of see / sea / vision and the image of shell as jewel!
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Thanks 🙂
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A beautiful bit-by-bit description, word-perfect.
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Thank you Rosemary
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This is a fine fibonacci.. The shape of it is very much symbolic of the shell.
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Thanks for your thoughts. This form was fun to write. 😊
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Really beautiful.
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Thank you Marian 🙂
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Love your use of homophones in the fib… good work
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Thanks 🙂
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Yes, yes. These words in their individuality create an image and sentiment and altogether remind us of our own experience.
Well-penned.
-HA
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Thanks 🙂
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Beautifully done.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Beautiful reversal on this, Sophia!
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