
Almost midnight,
when my shift ends…
and in walks a thief
at this dark hour.
But I’m no prophet,
no vessel,
though I speak with a seraph
every night at this station,
and it beats its blinding wings…
each eye gazing at lowly me.
{This poem is based on a prompt from the poetry community dVerse:
Create a 44 word poem (called a quadrille) using the word “eye”.}
Well I would be glad to get out of there right away.
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😂
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Wow, your words, although few, send a chill up my spine!
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That was definitely one of the effects I was going for! 😄
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Isn’t it wonderful when you get the response you were secretly hoping for?!?!?!
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Yes, for sure. 😊 I appreciate the feedback!
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Just chilling…all the more so after reading the background on the link…actually more than chilling…
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That’s exactly what I was going for, thanks!
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Oh my, you seem to have hit that spot … the spot that resonates with readers. Well done!
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Thank you 😊
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Oh I do love this… it seems like it would be better to be home safe and sound… ASAP
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Yes, indeed. 😄
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Wow – that’s a LOT of eyes, Sophie 🙂
-David
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Eyes and wings! 😁
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Oh my! That is chilling!
(But it also kind of makes me think of the TV show, “Evil.” )😏
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I’ve not seen it, but I looked it up and it sounds interesting. 😊
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The couple who created the show also did The Good Wife and The Good Fight. Sort of off-beat.
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