My naked feet pressed the wet blades flat and smooth. Grass is always coldest in the shadow of the Stone Tree. I dreamt about her. Mother told us that anyone who cut that tree would find a treasure inside.
Last night I was a sparrow circling above the forest. I caught a bright flash of white and silver like starlight. I knew I could find that place again in the morning.
After lessons, I drew a picture of her. Her bright limbs reaching for me through thick gray clouds. I wept because I could never be certain that those arms would be able to reach me here in the darkest part of the world.
When I found her, I lay down in the soft moss beside her and slept.
These memories were left here with the trees.
{Some short fiction for the dVerse Prosery prompt.
It’s meant to encourage poetry writers to try some fiction. I don’t think fiction is my cup of tea, but the prompts are meant to expand our creativity by taking us outside of our comfort zones.
This prompt asked us to incorporate a line of poetry: “These memories were left here with the trees.” It is taken from a poem by the new US poet laureate, Joy Harjo. Her complete poem is here.
You are only given a few days to write it. Most people write theirs on the first day of the prompt! I like to revise what I write a few times before I post… and after I post… and three years later… I am always revising what I write. I see what’s missing and I add it (or not), especially with fiction.
Poetry is a little different. Because a poem is such a small piece of writing, I usually get the sense that it is complete.
To be honest, I am certain that I am a poet, not a fiction writer. But these short fiction prompts can be fun to try, and maybe they will help me to develop as a poet too.
I got the idea for the piece of fiction above from a poem I wrote the other day. The prompt asked us to write in prose, so I turned my poem into a piece of short fiction.
I think the poem I wrote also deserves to see the light of day… so I will share it:
The Stone Tree
It’s been so long.
My insides,
like the trees
of ancient times,
are petrified.
I can count
ring upon ring
upon ring,
of gold, but I
am not that old.
No spirit will call
my bone white branches home,
or chew my silver leaves
When I weep, even
when I sigh,
always the smallest,
nearest creatures die,
and, unlike my evergreen
memory, decompose.
Losing someone and finding them again….this is a beautiful story..
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Thanks, Mary 😊
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Thank you for joining in. I think it’s good to try all sorts of writing. I’ve written a bunch of nonfiction books, and I think poetry writing has improved my writing in general. Thank you for sharing your poem, too.
Even though I see prompts in advance, I still don’t often post on the same day–so take your time. I revise, too. 🙂
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Thanks for the encouragement. I will definitely try another prose prompt. They are challenging, but I agree that they have the potential to expand our creativity. 😊🙏🏻
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